Tenchi and Ryoko Kissing

OMG I got one done that was satisfactory to me *Pants* I have been obsessing alllll week to draw a good Tenchi and Ryoko picture.

Yes I know lots is wrong! Please critique! My pencil shading wasn;t good, though the scanner kind of killed this..it is darker and nicer looking right next to me here on my sketchpad ^^ I know A lot of it looks kind of awkward but I am just..I surprised myself because usually I don;t and cannot draw humans for the life of me even though I want to.

I am a HUGE Tenchi and Ryoko fan. I figure in this pocture Tenchi is grabbing Ryoko and pulling her in because gosh darnit he waited long enough and he's going to give her a damned kiss to remember lol. Obviously she is not resisting (Though why would she?)

Comments appreciated! This is the first human kissing picture I've ever done O.o